tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post1331043321131547846..comments2024-03-25T05:17:05.202-05:00Comments on Writing In The Crosshairs: TERROR BLOGFEST : SMALL TEETH ARE THE SHARPESTRoland D. Yeomanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comBlogger21125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-87768743947574900692010-06-09T20:52:41.237-05:002010-06-09T20:52:41.237-05:00I felt like was there that night, on that ship wit...I felt like was there that night, on that ship with them *shudder*. And the picture is wonderfully ghoulish--just like that boy was.Nicole Murrayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09605448429334684845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-87101135408667693352010-06-08T20:12:57.768-05:002010-06-08T20:12:57.768-05:00Wow. What a scary picture. Thank you for my birthd...Wow. What a scary picture. Thank you for my birthday wish on my blog and the haiku. I love haiku poems.<br /><br />xo, SophiaSophiahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/11358243861204538559noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-83279426288995793542010-06-08T18:41:23.851-05:002010-06-08T18:41:23.851-05:00I love your Samuel, he's a great MC. And this ...I love your Samuel, he's a great MC. And this is a great entry for this blogfest. Scary and creepy, and oh so vivid. :)sarahjayne smythehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02589820347348973092noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-3316748251063037732010-06-08T17:28:54.601-05:002010-06-08T17:28:54.601-05:00Too creepy! Nicely done.Too creepy! Nicely done.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-40454263287619431272010-06-08T16:40:08.982-05:002010-06-08T16:40:08.982-05:00You scared the daylights out of me! I'll never...You scared the daylights out of me! I'll never look at a cruise ship or Grandma with the same eyes! Thanks for visiting my blog and following. *Whispers* ...can I exit your blog without passing that little scary person's photo? (she's spine-tingling badass on another level).Taleihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07317577935549931974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-39404427859303887252010-06-08T15:16:18.093-05:002010-06-08T15:16:18.093-05:00Very creepy. Oh, that was a great scene.Very creepy. Oh, that was a great scene.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01677563505368503476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-18650126693939190152010-06-08T13:22:33.142-05:002010-06-08T13:22:33.142-05:00Creepy perfect for the Terror Blogfest!Creepy perfect for the Terror Blogfest!Terry Stonecrophttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03726985400500572770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-42331538285648042812010-06-08T12:42:25.794-05:002010-06-08T12:42:25.794-05:00Great stuff, Roland. That photo creeped me out, to...Great stuff, Roland. That photo creeped me out, too!Talli Rolandhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04780882465745107715noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-76127379081606743742010-06-08T12:22:04.749-05:002010-06-08T12:22:04.749-05:00Just one more time, give me the strength to fight ...Just one more time, give me the strength to fight the monsters. <br /><br />Yes, give me that strength. Thank you, Roland.lesapeamusings.blogspothttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00212264979699827910noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-60654737286035561902010-06-08T12:05:13.441-05:002010-06-08T12:05:13.441-05:00Creepy, but great writing.
Neil Gaiman is one of ...Creepy, but great writing.<br /><br />Neil Gaiman is one of my favorite authors, although I have never read American Gods.Golden Eaglehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08721520451194318436noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-90615260471115673582010-06-08T11:36:00.400-05:002010-06-08T11:36:00.400-05:00The picture was scary enough...The writing took it...The picture was scary enough...The writing took it over the top. Now I'm not going to be able to take my post kickboxing nap!<br /><br />(Nice writing...but scary.)Sharon K. Mayhewhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07799235347319851345noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-39184378347387903352010-06-08T10:46:53.286-05:002010-06-08T10:46:53.286-05:00Once again your turn of phrase and similes are suc...Once again your turn of phrase and similes are such a great part of your character's voice. The "wounded moose" line was perfect. I totally saw his painful, awkward movements.<br /><br />Great job, Roland.Raquel Byrneshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/12870113745683162915noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-60040031552201435382010-06-08T10:30:28.792-05:002010-06-08T10:30:28.792-05:00A couple of weeks ago, you complained about my los...A couple of weeks ago, you complained about my losing eye post freaking you out, right? Then you post this horrible picture and creepy entry. Way worse!Theresa Milsteinhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03477761307315565259noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-55335905984060553822010-06-08T10:04:59.041-05:002010-06-08T10:04:59.041-05:00Great job, Roland. I really like Sam and Missy, an...Great job, Roland. I really like Sam and Missy, and I love the whole time concept thing.You did an excellent job of combining a bit of humor with the terror...not an easy thing to do!<br /><br />Thanks for participating in Terror Tuesday Blogfest.Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13267066733031149882noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-68041367785478024842010-06-08T08:52:11.169-05:002010-06-08T08:52:11.169-05:00Beautifully done. I especially liked the line: &qu...Beautifully done. I especially liked the line: "The stars burned cold and distant like the love of Man."LRhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/16839870925431989156noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-18583546576766845552010-06-08T07:32:58.362-05:002010-06-08T07:32:58.362-05:00I really liked the story. The dialogue was quick a...I really liked the story. The dialogue was quick and entertaining!<br /><br />That picture tho...yech!MBW aka Olleymaehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06311893784715159105noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-35578388969724761882010-06-08T06:26:46.964-05:002010-06-08T06:26:46.964-05:00Man that is one creepy photo.
I didn't read ...Man that is one creepy photo. <br /><br />I didn't read the excerpt because I don't want to get ahead of where we are with RITES OF PASSAGE.Matthew MacNishhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03264738483763244969noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-49006598260089231572010-06-08T06:11:03.711-05:002010-06-08T06:11:03.711-05:00Super creepy. Loved it. Great job, Roland!Super creepy. Loved it. Great job, Roland!Christine Danekhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00979611961825725350noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-28705506744980051072010-06-07T23:49:10.428-05:002010-06-07T23:49:10.428-05:00I think I just became a Neil Geiman fan! I've...I think I just became a Neil Geiman fan! I've read his blogs once or twice, but this trailer excites me.<br /><br />Oh; you posted an excerpt of your own, hey Roland?<br /><br />Way cool; creepy and intense. I liked that we get to see a bit of Sam's powers too.<br /><br />I didn't know about Mary's blogfest. I'll see if I have something decent to post. If so, maybe I'll join.<br /><br />Have a good night.<br /><br />.......dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-67927283839989655922010-06-07T23:43:31.323-05:002010-06-07T23:43:31.323-05:00Lovely writing, Roland.
That picture is nightmaris...Lovely writing, Roland.<br />That picture is nightmarish.Delia Moranhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01957513773943040065noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-42143685040702776862010-06-07T23:22:04.641-05:002010-06-07T23:22:04.641-05:00Oh wow. That's scary. Terrifying. And the pict...Oh wow. That's scary. Terrifying. And the picture!Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com