tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post1537673515584655187..comments2024-03-25T05:17:05.202-05:00Comments on Writing In The Crosshairs: CHAPTER TWO : HOW DO YOU SPELL SCREWED?Roland D. Yeomanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-84047970286861087662010-07-21T14:04:58.674-05:002010-07-21T14:04:58.674-05:00Wow thanks for sharing. What a great read!Wow thanks for sharing. What a great read!Glynis Peters https://www.blogger.com/profile/01175378917872403609noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-49986639948878042752010-07-20T19:05:27.109-05:002010-07-20T19:05:27.109-05:00How do you spell storyteller? R-O-L-A-N-D. So much...How do you spell storyteller? R-O-L-A-N-D. So much for crashing and burning as long as you have Marlene and Sam to pull you out of the flames. If or when you get to Meilori's order me a bourbon. Great job Roland.Nicole Murrayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09605448429334684845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-26922255552831352232010-07-20T19:02:54.668-05:002010-07-20T19:02:54.668-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Nicole Murrayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09605448429334684845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-42231890469526912882010-07-20T17:27:07.130-05:002010-07-20T17:27:07.130-05:00Wow, what a great idea. Loved it. :)Wow, what a great idea. Loved it. :)Lindsayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04313619484424363895noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-45824541041283149702010-07-20T14:42:44.123-05:002010-07-20T14:42:44.123-05:00This is terrific, Roland. Love the humor ["He...This is terrific, Roland. Love the humor ["Hell, son, there's not enough room in here to cuss a cat." "Ask Gypsy how wrong that is," I said.] juxtaposed with the drama ["Death," I squeaked.] I also love how the story is so unpredictable. I have an innate and annoying knack for seeing where plot lines are headed but you're keeping me guessing, and I'm intrigued.VR Barkowskihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04927993233682731113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-77597082402269165712010-07-20T14:34:40.800-05:002010-07-20T14:34:40.800-05:00I like how you're writing your unique personal...I like how you're writing your unique personality quirks into this. And awesome - Sam to the rescue! I was about to ask why the ghosts need to knock on the door however and can't just enter. That one's a little creaky, but, ok, it is explained. Yay; you took Gypsy.<br /><br />You've thought of everything a good thriller needs. Yes, I'm hooked. This is a marvelously creative idea. <br /><br />......dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-37449108924400110162010-07-20T13:37:10.848-05:002010-07-20T13:37:10.848-05:00Oh man, I didn't see the last line coming. Mor...Oh man, I didn't see the last line coming. More, more more!!!Terry Stonecrophttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03726985400500572770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-77753247030398525172010-07-20T11:45:49.186-05:002010-07-20T11:45:49.186-05:00Yup . . . I'm hooked.Yup . . . I'm hooked.Misty Watershttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17298645748620886228noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-83294120228399291352010-07-20T08:56:31.887-05:002010-07-20T08:56:31.887-05:00When you started to sppell R-O-L-A-N-D, the way it...When you started to sppell R-O-L-A-N-D, the way it was on the screen I initially thought it was going to be from that old commercial..."How do you spell relief? R-O-L-A-I-D-S. That's what I get for reading fast and anticipating, eh? ;)Terry W. Ervin IIhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13561009802388207515noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-51894523363558392010-07-20T07:45:08.108-05:002010-07-20T07:45:08.108-05:00Of course, the mirror! God, I love your mind! Grea...Of course, the mirror! God, I love your mind! Great scene and good you for taking Gyspsy.<br /><br />The Aeschylus quote is so true, isn't it.<br /><br />I'm all agog for the next installment!<br /><br />~<a href="http://www.thatrebelwithablog.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">that rebel, Olivia</a>Olivia J. Herrell, writing as O.J. Barréhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01107021392937169669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-6183406084736103472010-07-20T04:51:52.261-05:002010-07-20T04:51:52.261-05:00Oooooo, very very good. I love the line, "Tim...Oooooo, very very good. I love the line, "Time to think sideways.." By the way, you're my hero-you took Gypsy!!! You're a good man with a good heart. IcantwaitIcantwaitIcantwait till the next installment!!!The Words Crafterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14520267901489487512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-7399270307951767682010-07-20T01:27:27.694-05:002010-07-20T01:27:27.694-05:00Thanks, RohThanks, RohRoland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-31892470173963913562010-07-20T01:24:45.095-05:002010-07-20T01:24:45.095-05:00Very cool. I love the concept of writing character...Very cool. I love the concept of writing character and worlds to life (I kinda feel like I do that - I know they're lurking out there somewhere). Read the fire scene, too. Will definitely be back for more.roh morgonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06823641709307631626noreply@blogger.com