tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post4387846436143053174..comments2024-03-28T23:31:06.181-05:00Comments on Writing In The Crosshairs: FALLEN'S NOT JUST MY NAME BUT MY NATURERoland D. Yeomanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comBlogger12125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-37469217912491908482011-01-09T21:54:21.898-06:002011-01-09T21:54:21.898-06:00Words Crafter : Sadly, she is consumed with how fa...Words Crafter : Sadly, she is consumed with how far she has fallen -- not realizing how far she had climbed. Thanks for caring about Fallen. She would appreciate that.Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-19318514496927033112011-01-09T21:44:17.410-06:002011-01-09T21:44:17.410-06:00She has become more than what she was created to b...She has become more than what she was created to be. Does she realize that?<br /><br />Gotta love that lady....The Words Crafterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14520267901489487512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-79317221813802082362011-01-08T09:56:56.720-06:002011-01-08T09:56:56.720-06:00Michael : Thanks for fighting fatique to read my p...Michael : Thanks for fighting fatique to read my posts. It means a lot. Isn't it true? Our worst struggles always seem to be with our darker selves, don't they? I wish you a healing night's sleep. RolandRoland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-73340175237836933802011-01-08T01:28:14.026-06:002011-01-08T01:28:14.026-06:00Very exciting. Even at this hour and my eye bleary...Very exciting. Even at this hour and my eye bleary I could feel the tension. The struggle against one's alter ego....So cool.<br /><br />You never seise to amaze me.<br /><br />MichaelMichael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-18055763209619205932011-01-06T19:38:20.213-06:002011-01-06T19:38:20.213-06:00Letters : I would happy to help you in whatever wa...Letters : I would happy to help you in whatever way that I can. Just email me, and I will read and help as best I can. Thanks for enjoying my snippet of Fallen literally being beside herself!<br /><br />Heather : That is truly high praise. Robert E. Howard was, and still is, one of my favorite authors. My episode of Victor Standish walking through the pit of the evolved raptors in caves underneath New Orleans that should scientitically not exist is my nod of the head to Howard's chilling WORMS OF THE EARTH.Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-73894536279515791802011-01-06T11:10:13.040-06:002011-01-06T11:10:13.040-06:00Oh wow. Having read the sentence first yesterday a...Oh wow. Having read the sentence first yesterday and now getting to read what led up to it is AWESOME! I figured out who your writing reminds me of. Robert E. Howard, in a strange kind of Soloman Kane way. I love it!Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05130733681254163610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-82105169882271324342011-01-06T09:33:34.845-06:002011-01-06T09:33:34.845-06:00Mr. Roland... as always, a good read with a touch ...Mr. Roland... as always, a good read with a touch of innocence and mystery. btw, I have some questions about composition pacing (for my project), do you mind if I ask via email, some time in the future?imagery imaginedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07291852147832887334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-44932381101790666392011-01-06T08:36:07.924-06:002011-01-06T08:36:07.924-06:00Jodi : Thanks. I just thought the last line made m...Jodi : Thanks. I just thought the last line made more of an impact with the scene which gave birth to it. I hope Seattle treated you well.<br /><br />TechnoBabe : I tend to write movies. I'm glad you liked this little snippet. Thanks for following.Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-47599943564730357932011-01-06T05:58:28.172-06:002011-01-06T05:58:28.172-06:00"I reached out with my mind and bent the patt..."I reached out with my mind and bent the patterns of time/space to my will.<br />" Artistic license or just darn good writing? Who knows. But this post is like a good book I couldn't put away until every page was turned. There are some great visuals in this. Huge granite face of Jesus; knife fight in the interior of a blimp. Amazing really to picture all this.CiCihttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08615265608675467505noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-33253256969689784512011-01-06T01:24:13.634-06:002011-01-06T01:24:13.634-06:00This was great! Seriously. Wonderful of you to sha...This was great! Seriously. Wonderful of you to share this with us. :)<br /><br />JJodi Henryhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03216373059861459896noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-55172871164274193102011-01-06T00:09:51.740-06:002011-01-06T00:09:51.740-06:00Thanks, Summer. Fallen's pointed nail at my th...Thanks, Summer. Fallen's pointed nail at my throat was a bit distracting. LOL. Thanks for visiting and even more thanks for throwing such a fun blogfest.<br /><br />Happy Birthday!Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-35399820242561975302011-01-05T23:52:06.356-06:002011-01-05T23:52:06.356-06:00Very nice! I'm glad to see more of Fallen! You...Very nice! I'm glad to see more of Fallen! You have alot of repetition in this piece, but I'm sure when you revise you will work all the kinks out. Thanks so much for posting about her!Summer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.com