tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post5132943677530268372..comments2024-03-29T03:28:22.296-05:00Comments on Writing In The Crosshairs: GHOST OF A CHANCE_CHAPTER FOURTEEN : MURDER AS A KINDNESSRoland D. Yeomanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comBlogger7125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-77115890747075399292010-08-10T03:44:31.335-05:002010-08-10T03:44:31.335-05:00One more death before they are taken to the door o...One more death before they are taken to the door of nasah? <br /><br />Creepy!<br /><br />Take care<br />xOld Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13185547869183611159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-43048208500973570512010-08-09T09:20:06.355-05:002010-08-09T09:20:06.355-05:00The stats combined with your writing painted a pic...The stats combined with your writing painted a picture here. A accurate one. *shudders*<br /><br />crossing fingers for the travelers.Nicole Murrayhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09605448429334684845noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-90966413547730664442010-08-08T20:37:20.949-05:002010-08-08T20:37:20.949-05:00I like how Death wove in the statistics without be...I like how Death wove in the statistics without being preachy about them. They seemed relevant, and furthered the plot. And Death's reasoning behind death of the child worked well. Made her character sympathetic.<br /><br />This scene really made me enjoy her character. And I'm glad you're going back to Meilori's - and the price of entry sound intriguing.<br /><br />.......dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-14268648638510065882010-08-08T15:35:38.598-05:002010-08-08T15:35:38.598-05:00Roland - I'm giddy. NOT because it was a happy...Roland - I'm giddy. NOT because it was a happy scene - NO - but because reading this reminded me of why I love being a writer. Each voice was distinct. Thanks for the inspiration Roland!!!RaShelle Workmanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17582252557500502186noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-75726114468458736822010-08-08T14:44:54.549-05:002010-08-08T14:44:54.549-05:00hey, lake charles! I'm late to the party, but ...hey, lake charles! I'm late to the party, but I like what you're doing here! I'll be interested to read more~ :o)LTMhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05239077455322030275noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-33216384137772159972010-08-08T09:48:19.757-05:002010-08-08T09:48:19.757-05:00Okay, I'm still shivering from that trailer.
...Okay, I'm still shivering from that trailer.<br /><br />I am delighted. Another chapter and Roland is back! As much as I love you, Sam, and though I adore Raymond, Roland's voice is best of all.<br /><br />Death still makes me weep. Your portrayal of her is so loving. And gentle. She is "horrible", yet she is beautiful. Kind and compassionate. Almost. She is, after all, Death. But you, as a writer, treat her with love and respect and she becomes that.<br /><br />I love Kali as death, btw, magnificent choice.<br /><br />Learning about the world and history is a huge hook for me. I didn't know this of London and Berlin. I've read of Rome. I forget that our collective past is as ugly in some places as our present.<br /><br />Beautiful chapter.<br /><br />Welcome back. Wish it weren't so temporary.:)<br /><br />~<a href="http://thatrebelwithablog.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">Olivia</a>Olivia J. Herrell, writing as O.J. Barréhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01107021392937169669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-23889893460574122032010-08-08T07:41:13.328-05:002010-08-08T07:41:13.328-05:00I knew it had been really bad, but I've seen t...I knew it had been really bad, but I've seen those stats. How horrible. And what a cheap, disposable way of viewing life. Yes, in those places, Death would be a kindness.The Words Crafterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14520267901489487512noreply@blogger.com