tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post6415490291324477074..comments2024-03-25T05:17:05.202-05:00Comments on Writing In The Crosshairs: THE FUN NEVER STOPS WITH ZOMBIES_SHOW VERSUS TELL BLOGFEST entry {staring Victor Standish}Roland D. Yeomanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comBlogger6125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-14223956078109776012011-01-26T18:01:03.749-06:002011-01-26T18:01:03.749-06:00This was brilliant Roland .. I'm only sorry it...This was brilliant Roland .. I'm only sorry it took me so long to finally get round to reading it! A very worthy favourite!<br />What I really liked about this is that it showed without being self conscious. Pretty much all the other "shows" were very poetic but incredibly intense - not something of which you could read more than 1000 words at a time! This offering on the other hand, I could read all day!Dominic de Mattoshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05171145945316152596noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-12960637981132882872011-01-17T17:51:31.906-06:002011-01-17T17:51:31.906-06:00Imagery Imagined : I tried for wit under pressure ...Imagery Imagined : I tried for wit under pressure for the dialogue of Victor and his playground companions. Thanks for liking my efforts. Have a great new week, RolandRoland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-55998083145982151622011-01-17T17:48:08.087-06:002011-01-17T17:48:08.087-06:00I like the young naive dialogue between Victor and...I like the young naive dialogue between Victor and his school friends. Very believable and true to the scene.imagery imaginedhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07291852147832887334noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-80203999188923843932011-01-17T14:30:52.774-06:002011-01-17T14:30:52.774-06:00Heather : Thanks so much. I think of Victor's ...Heather : Thanks so much. I think of Victor's life in cinematic fashion -- what would make for a good movie? And you broke it down perfectly : entertaining, fun, and tragic at the same time.<br /><br />Your words made this coughing writer feel much better! Thanks again.Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-63590686100289795602011-01-17T14:20:28.003-06:002011-01-17T14:20:28.003-06:00I love this! Entertaining, fun, and tragic at the ...I love this! Entertaining, fun, and tragic at the same time. Wow, that is some childhood Victor had.Heatherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05130733681254163610noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-63607558446268412742011-01-17T13:29:46.353-06:002011-01-17T13:29:46.353-06:00Hi, everyone : I just thought I'd give the SHO...Hi, everyone : I just thought I'd give the SHOW version top-billing for awhile. Victor had nothing to do with it. Ah, actually, it was Alice -- she kept talking about finger sandwiches while giving my hands the once-over with her neon blue eyes. LOL.Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.com