tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post3596418332782570643..comments2024-03-28T23:31:06.181-05:00Comments on Writing In The Crosshairs: TRICK OR TREAT_A VERY MERRY HALLOWEENY BLOGFESTRoland D. Yeomanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comBlogger13125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-37660016885208695072010-10-26T21:14:16.983-05:002010-10-26T21:14:16.983-05:00No clue what happened earlier Roland. Seriously, ...No clue what happened earlier Roland. Seriously, it freaked me out too.<br /><br />Blogger must know I'm in a pissy mood and its torquing me off more just cuz it can.<br /><br />Great post. Love the way your characters always know how to stick it to the immortals in just the right way :) Victor's character is really unfolding.<br /><br />......dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-50318612509639948112010-10-26T18:02:12.909-05:002010-10-26T18:02:12.909-05:00jumping up and down jumping up and down jumping up...jumping up and down jumping up and down jumping up and down.....Finally! Someone gets their comeuppance!!!! Woohoo! Loved it. Ahem...but that last remark by Victor....?The Words Crafterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14520267901489487512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-27192069041924300142010-10-26T12:39:43.052-05:002010-10-26T12:39:43.052-05:00A great post, and great writing! I loved this line...A great post, and great writing! I loved this line:<br /><br />Forget about finger sandwiches. There were other parts of my body she would make a snack of if she caught us. I shivered at thought.<br /><br />Hahaha! Humor and creepiness, all rolled up in one. :)Just Another Sarahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07589166715361819941noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-77447840223772032072010-10-26T07:37:46.649-05:002010-10-26T07:37:46.649-05:00I love this! Is this out already, or are you still...I love this! Is this out already, or are you still writing it?Laura Enohttps://www.blogger.com/profile/09982794146667832204noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-54525064688854675632010-10-26T02:12:06.514-05:002010-10-26T02:12:06.514-05:00OMG. Phooooeeee. You totally kist knocked the ball...OMG. Phooooeeee. You totally kist knocked the ball out of the park again, Roland! Really really strong writing :D The Legend of Victor Standish? AWESOME.<br /><br />*HUGS*Mia Haysonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01041441666482084762noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-80861493531968758172010-10-25T23:51:48.078-05:002010-10-25T23:51:48.078-05:00First comment goes to Franklin: I think I said th...First comment goes to Franklin: I think I said the same thing to Roland when I read him for the first time - "he managed to make the ugly beautiful".<br /><br />Roland: I enjoyed this and I especially enjoyed the humor in this piece.<br /><br />If you get the chance, I would value your honest opinion on my "cliffhanger" entry. Thanks.Wendy Tyler Ryanhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10841984342368861282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-52919408395291575572010-10-25T16:51:33.468-05:002010-10-25T16:51:33.468-05:00Great stuff Roland, and very apropos to the season...Great stuff Roland, and very apropos to the season. Uncommonly vivid prose as always. This may seem like a strange sensory cross-wiring, but I find your writing has a dark, velvety quality to it.Franklin Beaumonthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17950277803662347842noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-79109901520767087212010-10-25T15:58:12.719-05:002010-10-25T15:58:12.719-05:00Dude! you made it outta the jar and into the Flash...Dude! you made it outta the jar and into the Flashlight...<br /><br />thanks for following... Paigehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04702664099837224184noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-27536893145411882122010-10-25T15:50:02.570-05:002010-10-25T15:50:02.570-05:00...how you continue to rattle off such dynamic pro......how you continue to rattle off such dynamic prose in such a timely manner, while maintaining the dayjob is baffling...beyond impressive. <br /><br />Roland, your writing is a rare treat.<br />"Ghost demons murmured hollow promises to my ears..." Love the visual.<br /><br />Well done Roland:)<br />ELElliot Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06319271528871804399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-8159094115866523372010-10-25T12:50:09.778-05:002010-10-25T12:50:09.778-05:00This is a wonderfully trick or treat story. Was ju...This is a wonderfully trick or treat story. Was judging for my blogfest but had to stop and read this first. Great post!:DBrenda Drakehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01263237745979525170noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-61682315242200584232010-10-25T10:51:46.492-05:002010-10-25T10:51:46.492-05:00Hmm. Interesting. A bit bloody...a bit scary I s...Hmm. Interesting. A bit bloody...a bit scary I suppose that's inevitable, given the subject matter. Very appropriate for Halloween.Travenerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/05160810997837674165noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-17281104881851185062010-10-25T10:23:08.755-05:002010-10-25T10:23:08.755-05:00What a fab and very dark and literal trick AND tre...What a fab and very dark and literal trick AND treat!! Well for Abigail and Victor!!<br /><br />Well done you! Take care<br />xOld Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13185547869183611159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-65147934494142168032010-10-25T08:43:51.568-05:002010-10-25T08:43:51.568-05:00grea post! lovely writing - as always!grea post! lovely writing - as always!Amie Borsthttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06303337229388844182noreply@blogger.com