tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post3907924845115763319..comments2024-03-29T03:28:22.296-05:00Comments on Writing In The Crosshairs: WHEN SHE WAS THUNDER IN THE DISTANCE_PART 1 OF 7_THE COLOR OF HER THOUGHTSRoland D. Yeomanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comBlogger4125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-7066004313134795582010-10-13T20:01:41.686-05:002010-10-13T20:01:41.686-05:00A wonderful bit of writing Roland. The perfect wa...A wonderful bit of writing Roland. The perfect way to draw in the reader. You've hooked me. The Native American magic is very believable.Jay Watsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13482261288019583877noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-26068973597796425902010-10-12T02:40:20.851-05:002010-10-12T02:40:20.851-05:00Love the dialogue! I'll be thinking about thi...Love the dialogue! I'll be thinking about this one for a while.Jennifer Hillierhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15783975547643539868noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-22130945675052593182010-10-11T21:04:39.121-05:002010-10-11T21:04:39.121-05:00Wow, I love this story. It pulled me in from the b...Wow, I love this story. It pulled me in from the beginning. The voice and the dialogue are very poignant. I like how the story says what needs to be said in the fewest amount of words. You make the old Indian and the little girl jump off the page! Very good.Emilyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14712199596384970994noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-66595744087977712052010-10-11T19:50:29.412-05:002010-10-11T19:50:29.412-05:00Whoa, we get to meet a character with angst. It...Whoa, we get to meet a character with angst. It's very difficult to not be bitter from growing up with injustice. Wolf Howl may not be bitter or angry, but he's nobody's fool. I like him!<br /><br />Curious how we meet this little girl and, in just a few days, she's older and dying. I have to wonder what effect this has on Wolf Howl....<br /><br />The music is yummy...I could drift on that a while myself!The Words Crafterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14520267901489487512noreply@blogger.com