tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post5066231207317496277..comments2024-03-25T05:17:05.202-05:00Comments on Writing In The Crosshairs: FIRST 28_ IWSG & WEP PostRoland D. Yeomanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comBlogger65125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-60331811268970208712019-03-06T10:49:16.358-06:002019-03-06T10:49:16.358-06:00😝😝Michelle Wallacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02750092836481599870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-56572401854216117052019-03-05T11:15:45.606-06:002019-03-05T11:15:45.606-06:00With a name that began with Y, I was used to being...With a name that began with Y, I was used to being last in school! :-)Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-34665956653622475132019-03-05T10:24:56.435-06:002019-03-05T10:24:56.435-06:00I'm still doing the WEP rounds. Better late th...I'm still doing the WEP rounds. Better late than never, right?<br /><br />I love the voice... it's spot on! It was such a smooth read.<br /><br />Aaaaaargh! Bullying - my pet peeve. <br />Can't escape those 'Rotisserie chickens'. There's a group in every school, strutting their stuff.<br />Really enjoyed this, Roland!Michelle Wallacehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02750092836481599870noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-9058982661063926042019-02-26T01:06:45.188-06:002019-02-26T01:06:45.188-06:00Or incriminating photos! :-)Or incriminating photos! :-)Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-12456198086688758422019-02-26T01:06:20.781-06:002019-02-26T01:06:20.781-06:00LOL. High School for me was a crucible of bullies....LOL. High School for me was a crucible of bullies. Hazy says thanks for liking her. :-)Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-20250665538803731492019-02-25T17:58:10.394-06:002019-02-25T17:58:10.394-06:00
Revenge is best served with a rotisserie.
<br />Revenge is best served with a rotisserie.<br />Roland Clarkehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03302133565980901397noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-71169385444845213302019-02-25T15:53:44.592-06:002019-02-25T15:53:44.592-06:00I much prefer the outcast type of heroine to prett...I much prefer the outcast type of heroine to pretty people with petty problems and perfect teeth. I like your heroine very well.<br />I found that high school was nowhere near cool enough to be Spork. High school was a bad convenience store sandwich.Ornery Owl of Naughty Netherworld Press and Readers Roost https://www.blogger.com/profile/07596105116325246476noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-20527006938169287312019-02-24T22:32:40.207-06:002019-02-24T22:32:40.207-06:00Single motherhood is never easy. But with Hazy, it...Single motherhood is never easy. But with Hazy, it is double trouble! So happy you got a new computer and can surf the net again. I've missed you. :-)Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-2394212299300452952019-02-24T22:31:22.340-06:002019-02-24T22:31:22.340-06:00Hazy would agree with you! I am so happy you liked...Hazy would agree with you! I am so happy you liked my feisty heroine. :-)Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-8484626753445650422019-02-24T12:31:00.224-06:002019-02-24T12:31:00.224-06:00Hi Roland, it's been awhile. New computer. So ...Hi Roland, it's been awhile. New computer. So I'm back. Loved the bad ass teen and her mom who doesn't know how to deal. Well written as always.<br />NancyN. R. Williamshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02174506528962095858noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-28357333072359882662019-02-23T02:03:34.004-06:002019-02-23T02:03:34.004-06:00This is such a clever concept, and you nailed Hazy...This is such a clever concept, and you nailed Hazy's voice. It must be a difficult ability to live with-both a blessing and a curse.Anstice Brownhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06659015918272722407noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-62485665276243573782019-02-21T09:31:33.496-06:002019-02-21T09:31:33.496-06:00Thank you so much for that, Hilary. :-)Thank you so much for that, Hilary. :-)Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-49015337978480131522019-02-21T06:42:00.260-06:002019-02-21T06:42:00.260-06:00Hi Roland - Hazy certainly has her work cut out fo...Hi Roland - Hazy certainly has her work cut out for her ... as she's deciding which idea or answer to turn to and continue on her life. No wonder she wants to be alone. I can quite easily feel for her - loved the telling too - cheers HilaryHilary Melton-Butcherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596532480645510678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-25455570879722190202019-02-20T21:10:47.153-06:002019-02-20T21:10:47.153-06:00Thanks for liking this flash of mine, Christopher....Thanks for liking this flash of mine, Christopher. :-)Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-54956788139475868872019-02-20T13:18:26.618-06:002019-02-20T13:18:26.618-06:00A realistic portrayal of a high school outcast, wh...A realistic portrayal of a high school outcast, who is more then she appears. Well done. Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/02149946316421950169noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-61504737622853741022019-02-20T10:17:33.314-06:002019-02-20T10:17:33.314-06:00Hazy sends her best to you, though she is still pu...Hazy sends her best to you, though she is still puzzling out the 30 different comments from you instead of the one I read! But they were all nice she says.Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-82682359732726440122019-02-20T10:16:07.500-06:002019-02-20T10:16:07.500-06:00"When in pain, joke" is Hazy's mantr..."When in pain, joke" is Hazy's mantra.Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-32461139052515490582019-02-20T10:15:25.600-06:002019-02-20T10:15:25.600-06:00Hazy either snarks or goes mad. Maybe a little of ...Hazy either snarks or goes mad. Maybe a little of both! Your comment made my day. Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-6123421523586122902019-02-20T10:14:20.350-06:002019-02-20T10:14:20.350-06:00Thank you so much, Nilanjana! :)Thank you so much, Nilanjana! :)Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-25633194637930189112019-02-20T10:13:17.035-06:002019-02-20T10:13:17.035-06:00High School was definitely a crucible for me! Ouch...High School was definitely a crucible for me! Ouch!Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-24441561282833533312019-02-20T04:03:14.816-06:002019-02-20T04:03:14.816-06:00Hi,
My heart went out to Hazy. I hurt for her. To ...Hi,<br />My heart went out to Hazy. I hurt for her. To be different, to stand out like a sore thumb, to be a subject of ridicule from others hurt. <br />Excellent job. You drew me in. <br />Shalom aleichem,<br />Pat GPat Garciahttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04204650731843984192noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-47566626190215825542019-02-20T03:51:24.443-06:002019-02-20T03:51:24.443-06:00Ha, what a character. Love the "dirty thirty&...Ha, what a character. Love the "dirty thirty" phrase. Well written Roland.dolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-77904607520221749272019-02-19T15:05:02.940-06:002019-02-19T15:05:02.940-06:00This was brilliant! I loved the opening to this pi...This was brilliant! I loved the opening to this piece, and it only got better from there. I can only imagine how difficult it would be to have Hazy's ability to see 30 possible outcomes at once. I loved her snark throughout, as well.L.G. Keltnerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07624902347418621283noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-10920347267954252722019-02-19T02:08:37.031-06:002019-02-19T02:08:37.031-06:00I absolutely loved the snarky tone of this persecu...I absolutely loved the snarky tone of this persecuted, angsty teenager. Voice done to a turn! <br /><br />Liked your use of the prompt, cool. Your flashes are always a pleasure to read.<br />Nilanjana Bosehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08656370320322301943noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-88707656456150471482019-02-19T01:44:54.171-06:002019-02-19T01:44:54.171-06:00Oh, yeah, high school is a tough time for most of ...Oh, yeah, high school is a tough time for most of us.Olga Godimhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00358026814685611301noreply@blogger.com