tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post5095863577098213271..comments2024-03-29T03:28:22.296-05:00Comments on Writing In The Crosshairs: GHOST OF A CHANCE_CHAPTER 25_PAIN'S RETURN ADDRESSRoland D. Yeomanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comBlogger14125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-41781517094915318662010-09-06T21:35:24.317-05:002010-09-06T21:35:24.317-05:00Toya! Gah! I'm with Words Crafter, I thought i...Toya! Gah! I'm with Words Crafter, I thought it would be Hemingway for some reason and I was thinking, "NO! Don't end it YET!!!"<br /><br />Love the twists and turns, ~<a href="http://thatrebelwithablog.blogspot.com" rel="nofollow">that rebel, Olivia</a>Olivia J. Herrell, writing as O.J. Barréhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01107021392937169669noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-47533144034767990762010-09-06T20:28:07.927-05:002010-09-06T20:28:07.927-05:00You're giving me goosebumps! Not that that'...You're giving me goosebumps! Not that that's unusual:)Terry Stonecrophttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03726985400500572770noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-82884146859388839742010-09-06T18:40:09.092-05:002010-09-06T18:40:09.092-05:00Whats behind door number 2, Monty?
........dhole...Whats behind door number 2, Monty?<br /><br /><br />........dholedolorahhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08715849844092553699noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-82506367263945049952010-09-06T13:47:41.886-05:002010-09-06T13:47:41.886-05:00Pretty wild, Roland. Don't know quite what to...Pretty wild, Roland. Don't know quite what to make of it yet!Elena Solodowhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/03037029195682225565noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-12256728163859225912010-09-06T12:22:43.147-05:002010-09-06T12:22:43.147-05:00great images in this one. this is my favorite line...great images in this one. this is my favorite line" In words hollow and golden as ghost bells in the night, DayStar said, "Until I goaded you to look at me with your accursed Sight."<br /><br />It gives such a haunted poetic feel to the voice.Summer Rosshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/08122694893668693244noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-86807304261877723362010-09-06T10:05:10.229-05:002010-09-06T10:05:10.229-05:00"The portal to the end of all flesh." Wo..."The portal to the end of all flesh." Wow great! Sent shivers up my spine.Kerri Cuevhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13305892536084882077noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-45778028074093140312010-09-06T10:02:45.925-05:002010-09-06T10:02:45.925-05:00These posts with the ghosts and spirits of actors ...These posts with the ghosts and spirits of actors and writers never cease to mesmerize me. Loved this :))Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01899768909313326172noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-74103590469534056222010-09-06T06:50:43.952-05:002010-09-06T06:50:43.952-05:00:):)Flying high in the sky....https://www.blogger.com/profile/15696562802402238945noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-13264911352681211242010-09-06T00:12:57.898-05:002010-09-06T00:12:57.898-05:00Stephanie : I've always been fond of Bogart. C...Stephanie : I've always been fond of Bogart. CASABLANCA to me is the perfect movie. The script was literally written day by day, too.<br /><br />As for Marlene Dietrich, she was a true hero in WWII. She turned down the world offered her by Hitler to return to Germany. <br /><br />Then, for 3 years, she made no films -- instead, with a death sentence on her head from Hitler, she entertained the troops ON THE FRONT LINES. She slept in jeeps, in tents, and on dirt floors that trembled with the impact of neary mortar fire. <br /><br />Words Crafter : Happy I could surprise you. The living can visit Meilori's in dreams, but not often. And things get ... interesting when my avatar goes through the Door of Nasah ("testing" in ancient Hebrew.)<br /><br />Wendy : So great to have you comment again. And I tried to make my ghostly mystery everything I would want to read. Things are about to "heat up" for my poor avatar.<br /><br />Elliot : How insightful ... in a way. DayStar is a sort of Medusa, who turns to stone the hopes, dreams, and loves of those hapless mortals he crosses paths with.<br /><br />Amanda : In my novels, the Door to Nasah leads to a strange dimension called Kol Basar (ancient Hebrew for "the end of all flesh." My avatar is about to learn that no good deed goes unpunished. Thanks for commenting.Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-18394772413987569422010-09-05T23:39:24.216-05:002010-09-05T23:39:24.216-05:00Intriguing cast! Although I'd trade Humphrey ...Intriguing cast! Although I'd trade Humphrey Bogart for someone nicer- maybe Clark Gable. ;)Stephanie Thorntonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17437077559099315853noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-89730809221571467272010-09-05T23:36:37.682-05:002010-09-05T23:36:37.682-05:00Doh!!! *face palm AND a head slap* How did I miss ...Doh!!! *face palm AND a head slap* How did I miss that? Of course Ms. Bacall is still alive!!! Duh. And I could've sworn Hemingway was the one strolling toward them. Hmmmm, very slick Mr. Yeomans. Very slick. All this time and no one questioned Lauren being there. Wow. Observant I'm apparently not. <br /><br />Curious what happens to Roland when he goes through that door....The Words Crafterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14520267901489487512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-49415378929075135832010-09-05T23:10:00.335-05:002010-09-05T23:10:00.335-05:00Deliciously imaginative, Roland, with an outstandi...Deliciously imaginative, Roland, with an outstanding cast, no less.Just Wendy https://www.blogger.com/profile/05268645629027109282noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-43629593671840171162010-09-05T21:59:34.745-05:002010-09-05T21:59:34.745-05:00...you've got me picturing DayStar as a male v......you've got me picturing DayStar as a male version of Medusa and I'm not entirely sure why. <br /><br />Great post Roland, with an all-star cast from the past!<br /><br />Have a great holiday weekend,<br />ELElliot Gracehttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06319271528871804399noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-73784847750984370952010-09-05T21:11:12.452-05:002010-09-05T21:11:12.452-05:00Nice. "The portal to the end of all flesh&quo...Nice. "The portal to the end of all flesh" is a spooky thought...Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com