tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post5639152973993739557..comments2024-03-25T05:17:05.202-05:00Comments on Writing In The Crosshairs: MAD SCIENCERoland D. Yeomanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comBlogger10125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-66112814911582118412014-06-02T16:52:05.793-05:002014-06-02T16:52:05.793-05:00Janie:
Why did you like it? Dialogue? Subject matt...Janie:<br />Why did you like it? Dialogue? Subject matter? Characters? I'll have to look it up. :-)Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-24338384162244997602014-06-02T16:26:42.537-05:002014-06-02T16:26:42.537-05:00Small Island by Andrea Levy
Love,
JanieSmall Island by Andrea Levy<br /><br /><br />Love,<br />JanieJanie Junebughttps://www.blogger.com/profile/10573607241326291404noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-30557967564560079172014-06-02T12:39:24.995-05:002014-06-02T12:39:24.995-05:00Elephant's Child:
I am currently reading the n...Elephant's Child:<br />I am currently reading the new HARRY DRESDEN novel, so I am happy ... until it ends. Like you, I love it when I stumble upon a series I enjoy.<br /><br />Robyn:<br />I quoted exactly about the verbs but I suspect it was an editing error on the article's part -- and it meant to say ADverb. :-)<br /><br />I am facing another cancer surgery -- this time on my left ear. <br /><br />I have so many dearly loved authors that it would be hard to pick out one. <br /><br />Kitty:<br />I was tempted to start GAME OF THRONES but with so many maimings, betrayals, and deaths of favorite characters -- I decided like with many Stephen King's novels to bypass it.<br /><br />I hope you enjoy the series. I am tempted to start the Walt Longmire mystery series since I enjoy the TV show.<br /><br />D.G.:<br />You've re-interested me in Tony Hillerman with your latest post.<br /><br />Thanks for the compliment about DEATH IN THE HOUSE OF LIFE. Mr. Hillerman's ghost is probably muttering under his breath about putting me in with his prose! :-)<br /><br />Writing my sequel to it is teaching me even more about ancient Egypt and Egypt in the late 1890's.<br /><br />Hart:<br />A perceptive comment. Yes, sometimes language does gets in the way.<br /><br />CRAFTING a story shows in the quality of the feelings in the reader as she busily turns the pages, caught up in the moments of characters that seem real to her, right?<br /><br />Issac Asimov kept his characters at arm's length from the story it felt -- and so I could not get "close" to them which I want to do in any novel.<br /><br />A BEER FOR THE SHOWER:<br />Like I told Robyn, I think the author of the article I read meant ADverbs which makes more sense. :-)<br /><br />I think these days folks want very short chapter as in James Patterson -- who I hear doesn't even fully write his novels anymore.<br /><br />And where would the sense of accomplishment and pride come when you just thumbed an equation to life to write your award-winning novel?<br /><br />But you're right: it would be tempting!Roland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-29386597172339770682014-06-02T11:45:03.084-05:002014-06-02T11:45:03.084-05:00I too am confused on the verb thing. People don...I too am confused on the verb thing. People don't want to read books where things happen, I guess?<br /><br />I can hardly wait until science can create a computer program that churns out award winning novels for me. It would save me SO much work!A Beer for the Showerhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17029139745335325356noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-58925133628218963162014-06-02T10:34:10.224-05:002014-06-02T10:34:10.224-05:00I think that language that doesn't get in the ...I think that language that doesn't get in the way of the story is critical for keeping me engaged in the moment--nothing I have to look up, limit description to the stuff that matters to the story. I also like being in a 'close' PoV--I want to know a bit what they're thinking, not just be told what they're doing.<br /><br />The couple series I have dived into and LIVED though, are, Harry Potter and Game of Thrones and both of those have pieces that satisfy ALL of the things I like, mystery, romance, complicated social relationships, early hints at later events. The stories aren't just told, they're built.Hart Johnsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17599570189253229318noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-82279890407654627992014-06-02T10:03:21.890-05:002014-06-02T10:03:21.890-05:00Two books have drawn me into their story: Death in...Two books have drawn me into their story: Death in the House of Life (it had many of my fave characters-especially McCord, Oscar Wilde and others); and the last fiction book of Hillerman that I reviewed today called Skinwalkers. . .on the Rainforest Blog.<br /><br />I seldom read books about motivation (I have lots), or inspiration (I have many sources of this too), but I love books that teach me something I didn't know or transport me to other locales. D.G. Hudsonhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06213237734772028645noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-74754108587233189512014-06-02T05:46:29.258-05:002014-06-02T05:46:29.258-05:00This comment has been removed by the author.Old Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13185547869183611159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-71300925228614171272014-06-02T05:46:11.768-05:002014-06-02T05:46:11.768-05:00I am totally into Game of Thrones (book 1)!!! I...I am totally into Game of Thrones (book 1)!!! I'm in super awe at the complexity and depth!! I like to tell those who are into the TV series that at least I'm at the stage where the Starks are all intact! LOL!<br /><br />Take care<br />xOld Kittyhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/13185547869183611159noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-74571216611491617462014-06-02T02:01:07.862-05:002014-06-02T02:01:07.862-05:00Interesting. I understand why cliches don't se...Interesting. I understand why cliches don't sell books. But verbs? Action-less characters? I thought it was a good thing to use strong verbs. Maybe it's a matter of quality vs quantity. (?) I like sassy, quick-witted characters. Anne Lamott's my favorite author.<br /><br />I hope you're well, Roland. Thinking of you.Rawknrobyn.blogspot.comhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15997241410192066577noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-15977256326110052162014-06-02T00:53:18.911-05:002014-06-02T00:53:18.911-05:00I have had a good run with novels recently.
I love...I have had a good run with novels recently.<br />I loved The Golem and the Jinni (Helene Wecker) and have just devoured River Fairchild's Jewel of Chandra series - or at least those she has completed.<br />No stereotypes - in character or situation, evocative writing, and evocative prose get me in - and keep me.Elephant's Childhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/06650565833097914052noreply@blogger.com