tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post8113845647117021139..comments2024-03-12T20:14:12.308-05:00Comments on Writing In The Crosshairs: GHOST OF A CHANCE_CHAPTER 39_WHEN THE STARS DROWN IN DARKNESSRoland D. Yeomanshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comBlogger8125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-20305058534502665482010-12-29T10:02:45.794-06:002010-12-29T10:02:45.794-06:00Okay. I'm ready now to read the next installme...Okay. I'm ready now to read the next installment.....I think *gulp*The Words Crafterhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14520267901489487512noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-92072485985378041962010-12-29T03:48:54.923-06:002010-12-29T03:48:54.923-06:00Hi Roland .. a great draw, to pull us in with your...Hi Roland .. a great draw, to pull us in with your story .. and the different twists and turns .. <br /><br />Enjoy the build up to the New Year .. HilaryHilary Melton-Butcherhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17596532480645510678noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-14962434399907536412010-12-28T23:50:11.541-06:002010-12-28T23:50:11.541-06:00One thing I noticed here--you use nice, active ver...One thing I noticed here--you use nice, active verbs. Gouged, lunged, shot, snatched, slashed, yowled. Good active and colorful stuff. ;o)Carol Riggshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/14092209912983783974noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-25986422420366045142010-12-28T21:22:15.541-06:002010-12-28T21:22:15.541-06:00Hello again! Visiting back. I do hope the poor pup...Hello again! Visiting back. I do hope the poor puppy survived the terrible accident, but if he doesn't I am sure he is in God's hands right now, a much better place for him to be.<br /><br />By the way, the follow button is in the bottom corner of my blog. Hehe. Have a great and blessed day! :)Anonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-42824028736668385672010-12-28T20:47:33.669-06:002010-12-28T20:47:33.669-06:00Kristina : I am always ready to be a friend. I'...Kristina : I am always ready to be a friend. I'm traveling to your blog right now. Have a great New Year. RolandRoland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-29030504022731103842010-12-28T20:32:21.685-06:002010-12-28T20:32:21.685-06:00Hello! I was here, asking for friendship. ;) Would...Hello! I was here, asking for friendship. ;) Would you like to follow each others blogs? Advance Happy New Year. :DAnonymousnoreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-24660278797015365692010-12-28T20:14:36.219-06:002010-12-28T20:14:36.219-06:00Michael : As they say : From your lips to God'...Michael : As they say : From your lips to God's ear! I pray we both get an agent really soon.<br /><br />I'm happy I was able to sketch the battle in such a way as to draw you in.<br /><br />May your writing be productive this week. With lab work and road blood runs, I seem to have fallen behind in my writing my WIP ...<br /><br /> but I have plotted a deadly race Victor has with evolved raptors (think Jurassic Park raptors become manlike) hot on his heels ... all to save Alice from torture. It takes all his expertise with Parkour to win.<br /><br />Hey, he's Victor Standish, and Victor is more than just his name!<br /><br />Have a great evening, RolandRoland D. Yeomanshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00338410857990551352noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-8681132888977525688.post-4981776863041185562010-12-28T19:32:45.821-06:002010-12-28T19:32:45.821-06:00You really do love that kitty, don't you? lol
...You really do love that kitty, don't you? lol<br /><br />Very exciting read! I was totally caught up in the battle.<br /><br />And you can't get an agent ... why? Something isn't right. How can any agent miss this ... this amazing way you spin a tale? <br /><br />Know this my talented friend, time is on your side. It will happen.<br /><br /><br />MichaelMichael Di Gesuhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/17047267262428143113noreply@blogger.com