I thought how fun it would be to exchange letters with John Steinbeck when he was a struggling writer in the Depression
I thank you for your own Christmas present in response to my question of what might a bestselling book be like in your time.
I thank you for your own Christmas present in response to my question of what might a bestselling book be like in your time.
Along with women, who through necessity or from the sheer pleasure of dominating rather than being dominated,
learned to get what they wanted through the only coin appreciated by the world:
their beauty
I started up the steep steps. It was a nice walk if you liked grunting.
There were two hundred and eighty steps up to Cabrillo Street.
They were drifted over with windblown sand and the handrail was as cold and wet as a toad’s belly.
When I reached the top the
sparkle had gone from the water and a seagull with a broken trailing leg was
twisting against the off-sea breeze.
WHAT DO I MEAN?
Write a basic text, then keep injecting more and more descriptive language
until your reader can see, feel, smell, and taste everything your protagonist is experiencing.
STOP WORRYING ABOUT THE PLOT
Does Life have one coherent Plot?
Not that I have seen on either side of the grave.
It seems to me that the real mystery is not who killed Sir John in his study,
but what the situation really was, what the people were
after, what sort of people they were.
Once you have illuminated those facets, the whole gem of the mystery is revealed ...
as is the murderer.
HAVE SOMETHING WORTHWHILE TO SAY
A good mystery is an allegory of what makes life worth living
and how easy it is for it all to go astray.
I talked about what I saw in my L.A. -
the corruption, the crime, the hubris of the elite and their relationship to the human condition -
while telling a riveting, absorbing tale.
WHAT DO YOU SEE IN YOUR WORLD?
How could you relate your impressions of it in a ripping good yarn?
SPEAKING OF GOOD YARNS
My friend, Roland Yeomans,
has written another good one.
TRY IT OUT.
THE 1ST 3 CHAPTERS ARE FREE
https://smile.amazon.com/gp/product/B0967PV44B/ref=pe_34264310_596653870_pe_re_csr_ea_lm
Come August 9th, my friend, Denise Covey
has a stirring new fantasy coming out.
But first:
A children's book for my next Vella!
Hoopah, the winged buffalo calf
is joined by Hibbs, the cub with no clue,
Azure, the insane know-it-all unicorn,
(He's insane because he knows it all you see!)
and
Ratatoskr, the gossiping squirrel of
the World Tree, Yggdrasil,
to save their world.
Or destroy it ...
whichever comes first!
That is right:
No e-readers for Kindle Vella!
Vella is available in the Kindle app for iOS
and on the web.
So your Vella will have to compete
against text messages, Facebook, Twitter.
and other smartphone sirens!
What a race for attention keeping, right?
Imagine someone reading your chapter
receiving a text.
Is your chapter so riveting that a reader
will come back
to see what happens next?
Readers who buy tokens are granted one FAVE,
per week
eliminating the fraudulent fake reviews
Amazon and we hate.
I have yet to receive one.
But there is always tomorrow, right?
https://www.amazon.com/kindle-vella/product/B0982J4L23
Twenty-two chapters are now available.
Soon the 23rd chapter.
THY CRIMES BECKON US,
will be available as well.
I wonder if I am being foolish trying
this new experiment.
What do you think?
Give my Vella books a chance,
will you?
When will Kindle Vella stories
be available to readers?
Amazon has not released an official date.
but it is expected to launch before
the end of July 2021.
A piece of Hindu scripture ran
through the mind of Robert Oppenheimer then:
“Now I am become Death,
the destroyer of worlds."
Those of you who have been reading my posts lately know
that Vella found fault in two of my episodes since they had characters
I used in other books and referenced scenes from earlier books.
Lake Pleasant: a city as toxic as the lake for which it is named.
It is a city where anything can happen so long as it is terrible, and innocence has a short life span.
The powerful rule, and the weak scurry for the
dubious safety of the shadows.
Sometimes they scurry to the impoverished detective, Adam Black. “Black Magic” he is called on the streets.
He refuses to explain his name.
Any explanation would be ignored, but his silence unsettles those who
prowl the shadows.
The crime boss, Anthony Vincent, has a job for Black: find his missing daughter.
The fee for success: Black gets to live.
Vincent is dying.
All the would-be successors circle Black in his search for some secret to topple the dying King.
Adam Black is aware
they are playing a game against opponents for whom they are no match.
It is a dark secret that would be his death
if it were known he possessed it:
reality has been invaded by beings thrust against their will onto this earthly plane …
and want nothing more than to return, though the door
has revolved again to other stranger shores.