{Excerpt from the third volume in the Saga of Victor Standish, SOMETIMES THERE'S NO VICTOR} [496 words]
(Victor and Alice have been flicked back to the year 1826 by the eerie supernatural entity, DayStar, like you or I would brush away knats) :
The blood moon leered down on Alice and me through thick, silent mists snaking above us. The mists were the only things silent across the grassy courtyard.
Drums beat wild rhythms as rocking black men chanted, their wide eyes glazed over. In the shadows of the huge bonfire, black dancers wheeled about, long machetes flashing in their fists.
I was so scared it felt like my skin was about to leap off me and do the Mambo with my skeleton. I knew where we were from pictures in that book on voodoo in early New Orleans :
Congo Square, across Rampart Street from the French Quarter. But a very primitive French Quarter.
I reached out and took Alice’s ice-cold right hand. My heart calmed. With her at my side, I could take on monsters.
With the musk of sweat, alcohol, and hate heavy in the humid night air, Alice whispered in that odd British accent of hers, “Victor, we are in serious jeopardy here.”
Now, when a flesh-eating ghoul says she’s afraid, even a mongrel like me knows that life has just hit a new high in low-down.
The drums suddenly stopped. And every wild eye turned to us.
I winked at her. “You think?”
A tall woman, her black face glowing with deadly grace, spoke soft, yet it carried out across the dancers and slithering snakes on the grass.
But none of them equaled the boa across her shoulders.
“You two do not belong here.”
Alice murmured, “Look at Marie Laveau, Victor. She is such a striking woman.”
I grinned crooked, “Even without the snake.”
A small, crooked old man limped to us. “She be right.”
He turned to Alice, his voice gaining an edge. “’Specially you, nzumbe.”
I stiffened. “That’s Myth Nzumbe to you, Fright Face.”
Alice lips got tight. “Is everything a jest to you, Victor?”
I gave her icy hand a squeeze.
“Never you, Alice. But you can’t let monsters see you sweat.”
Alice rose a prim and proper eyebrow. “I never sweat.”
The old man limped closer. “You be half-dead, now, Miss Nzumbe. Soon you be all dead.”
I shook my head. “Don’t count on it, Legba.”
He stepped back an inch. “You know me?”
“I know of you.”
“Then, you knows how powerful I be. I be the origin of life!”
I snorted. “Get real. That would be Elohim. And I’m pretty sure you’re not Him.”
Legba husked, “So sure are you?”
I nodded to the squirming reptiles on the grass.
“Pretty sure. He’s not real fond of snakes.”
He cackled, “But Erzulie is, and she be right behind you, boy. Erzulie, loa of Love and Death.”
I turned to face the tall black woman with scars on her face and smiled,
“That’s a new look for you, Mother.”
“No, child. ‘Dis face be veeery old. And you be in bad trouble.”
I winked at her and copied her accent, “Dat be an veery old story, Mother.”
Very awesome, Roland. The words you were forced to use did not stand out like second cousins twice removed. They fit so perfectly with the writing I fear I my entry paled by comparison.
---"The blood moon leered down on Alice and me through thick, silent mists snaking above us. The mists were the only things silent across the grassy courtyard." Love the imagery!
Wow, this is such a great line,"I was so scared it felt like my skin was about to leap off me and do the Mambo with my skeleton."---Such a great teaser, but I must tell you. It is so fun to read this outloud. My daughter just loved it :)
Wendy : What are you talking about? Your passage was great. I wanted to know more about Kayla's dangerous war with the creatures out of myth. Thanks for the nice words about my entry.
Siv : I'm glad you liked my imagery. I'm even more delighted you read my excerpt aloud to your daughter and that she loved it. That made my morning. :)
Heather : That's Victor for you : smooth, very smooth - even in the roughest times! Thanks for enjoying his adventure.
Summer : Yes, Legba is a rascal. But don't let his appearance fool you : there's more to him than meets mortal eyes. I am so happy my work reminded you of a classic like THE LION KING.
Thanks, Josh : This was a fun blogfest, wasn't it? Being ill, yet being at work, too, leaves me with so little free time to visit all my friends. Roland
Thanks, Francine. Being at work leaves me with little time to visit my friends. Sorry. And I have that convention all this weekend. Whew! Sometimes there are not hours in the day!
It means a lot that you liked my entry. Voice and attitude - that's Victor, all right!
Amazing job, Roland! Not only did you work in Wendy's 'M' words seamlessly, you managed to write about two of my favorite Loa, Papa Legba and Erzulie. So do you believe Marie L. was one woman, or was it a woman and her daughter in the same role and that's how she managed to go on so long?
VR : I personally think the daughter lived the role of her mother, fostering the legend of the long-lived Marie Laveau. In my novel, NEW ORLEANS ARABESQUE, I have the daughter grow old as Marie drains her of her youth. In that novel, Marie is still middle-aged appearing in the year 2005. McCord lets her alone in her life-draining because she preys on criminals.
Lydia : That's really nice of you to say.
Michael : Your own entry was elegant and evocative. Great bit of prose poetry.
T.D. : That book is headed your way. Gypsy just cost me the price of a used car. I am flying on vapors at the moment. But next paycheck, it is heading your way. Sorry about the delay getting it to you in the Carribbean.
Thanks, Carol : I've seen that leering moon while walking the Katrina-devastated streets of New Orleans. Brrr.
Jo : Thanks. It's hard to be cool writing with presentations to give buzzing in my head. Glad you liked my post.
WordsCrafter : I really hope Victor gets published soon, too. He was a big hit with my audience at the convention today. They wanted me to bring Alice tomorrow. But I reminded them that when she eats finger sandwiches, it can get messy!
The history of New Orleans is so fascinating, influenced as it was by being governed by the governments of Spain, France, and finally America during the most stunning and evolving time on the world stage. Roland
Dreamer. Writer. Believer in the worth of each soul I meet.
It is not so bad a thing to have been born with the gift of laughter and the knowledge that the world is mad.
Book 4: Victor Standish risks all reality to bring back from the dead those he loves.
WOLF HOWL HAS HIS OWN BLOG!
VISIT IF YOU DARE
THE LAST SHAMAN AUDIO BOOK!
Mankind's time is nearly up. Can the last Lakota shaman save the soul of the assassin he loves before the end?
McCorkle Creations!
Let Heather McCorkle design covers and promo materials for you. You will be amazed.
ONLY $4.86!
Sometimes it is death, not life, that brings us love
A GHOSTLY WRITING MANUAL
Twain, Hemingway, Lovecraft & More!
An Age Is Ending & Ancient Evil Returning
Like PENNY DREADFUL? This is for you.
A SUPERNATURAL LONGMIRE
In Egypt, the dead never rest easy
NO ONE HEARS THE SCREAMS IN SILENT FILMS
An isolated Hollywood film crew is hunted by Nightmare
A SAMPLER OF MY HEROES
Mysteries Explained, Secrets Exposed
The Origin of Toomey Starks!
Hellhounds were never this much fun! Only $4!
VOODOO & LOVE IN THE FRENCH QUARTER
Now available in PRINT!
FRENCH QUARTER NOCTURNE AUDIO BOOK!
The supernatural predators come out after Katrina. Can two undead legends stop them?
AFTER KATRINA, THERE IS NONE BUT TWO TO STOP THE UNDEAD
ONLY $1.99 WHEN YOU BUY THE KINDLE BOOK!
LISTEN to GHOST OF A CHANCE
Can an author be drawn into his own fictional world and killed by his own characters?
HIBBS HAS FOUND HIS VOICE!
A tale of enchantment
Souls At The Crossroads
Where do you need to be?
THE DEADLIEST ENEMY IS WITHIN
What if Stephen King wrote of the life of a blood courier?
Listen to this haunting tale of horror and love
It is 1853. An undead Texas Ranger is on board a cursed ship in search of a murderer who is wearing the face of her last victim as a mask.
Listen to the LAST FAE
When the world is mad, there is little else to do but show them what true insanity is!
Can a man marry both the moon and the sun?
In the eclipse of myth, he can
What Defense is an innocent soul against the Powers of Darkness?
Let Hibbs, the cub with no clue, show you
Before Indiana Jones or Allan Quartermain
There was Sam McCord and his doomed love for Meilori Shinseen
Alice and Victor in 1834 New Orleans
Do a review and have a 1 in 13 chance to win a Johnny Depp autograph!
Buy_FRENCH QUARTER NOCTURNE
Hurricane Katrina has cast New Orleans into darkness. Predators, living and undead, close in on the helpless survivors. Can Samuel McCord and a vampire priest keep the French Quarter from being drowned in blood?
Buy_LET THE WIND BLOW THROUGH YOU
Enter the dangerous world of a Native American Noir thriller where forbidden love clashes with the politics of crime
You will never see the end coming
In his beginning is his end
My 1st SERIAL TRILOGY continues
There are none so lost as those who refuse to see
The 1st SERIAL TRILOGY!
In the dark, we are all orphans
In Memoriam - Maukie my cyber friend
RITES OF PASSAGE link
The earliest Samuel McCord adventure: Dare to board a fantasy Titanic as it sails into the Bermuda Triangle
VICTOR'S HERE!
BOOK 1: No one talks openly of the misty figures seen walking along New Orleans' iron-laced terraces, casting no shadow. Of the shapes seen rising from sewer grates. And no one willingly visits the crypt of Marie Laveau at midnight. Into this strange world arrives the street orphan, Victor Standish, from Charon's Greyhound. Charon has to keep up with the times ... the End Times. And the teen destined to be called the "Ulysses of the French Quarter" has come just in time for Hurricane Katrina, the End of All Things ... and the deadly love of the Victorian ghoul, Alice Wentworth.
VICTOR AND ALICE ARE BACK!
BOOK 2: Victor's a street kid. Alice is a Victorian ghoul Their love breaks the chain of reason. Their new adventures bring the French Quarter back from the brink of nightmare.
THE RIVAL
BOOK 3: Victor & Alice are in the French Quarter of 1834. Voodoo. Demigods. Revenants. And the hilarious Menage a Trois of Death! Oh, and someone we love dies at the end.
END OF DAYS is here!
St. Marrok's. The most eerie high school in which you will ever die. Its curriculum? The End of Days. Alice Wentworth plans to get an A+.
ADRIFT IN THE TIME STREAM link
SEQUEL to RITES OF PASSAGE: Come aboard the doomed DEMETER with undead Texas Ranger, Sam McCord, and sail with her into the depths of madness in ADRIFT IN THE TIME STREAM.
Buy_CREOLE KNIGHTS
SEQUEL to FRENCH QUARTER NOCTURNE: The dead rise. Elder Beings strain to enter our world through Katrina devastated New Orleans. And the Angel of Death is kidnapped to clear their way. Can Sam McCord stem the tide of madness in time?
Buy_THE LAST FAE
Once there was an age undreamed where legends walked this earth … and nightmares, too. Terrible were the battles, tragic the outcome of the wars. Until finally there were only two survivors : the nightmare and one bruised legend. These are the legend’s stories, each one a different facet of the same priceless gem – a jewel that has come to believe herself worthless. So come. Listen to her. Listen to THE LAST FAE.
GHOST OF A CHANCE
What if what you wrote became real?
BURNT OFFERINGS
When dreams are sacrificed, it is the soul that burns.
CHECK OUT THE FUN!
Explore if you dare
Buy_THE LAST SHAMAN
Journey with the last Lakota shaman, Wolf Howl. The white govenments call him Drew August. Those who hunt him call him Death. The last day of Man has dawned. Watch as Wolf Howl turns to meet his human hunters. Shadow, the love of his life, returns to aid his hunters. Then, Mankind's death descends. Can he save Shadow before the world's time runs out?
BRING ME THE HEAD OF McCORD!
Only 99 cents. C'mon. Take a chance.
GHOST WRITERS IN THE SKY
LEARN TO WRITE BETTER AND LAUGH ALONG THE WAY
LAST EXIT TO BABYLON
At the dawn of the End of All Things, the Last Fae finds there is no hope ... but love.
IT'S HERE TO BUY!!
The trilogy concludes. Not even the eclipse of myth is forever. But love is. And eclipses return. Listen. The voice of Blake, son of Man, is calling across the night skies.
Buy THE PATH BACK TO DAWN
Only in the eclipse of myth can a young man find himself with both the Moon and the Sun as his brides. Can he survive what follows?
Buy_LOVE LIKE DEATH
From the pages of THE LAST FAE springs this paranormal romance/thriller. Fallen, the last fae, discovers the name of the young teenager to whom she lost her heart : Blake Adamson.But she also discovers what happens when you believe your fears over your love : heartache and loss. And so Blake Adamson finds himself torn between two loves : one fae, the other an alien drinker of souls. Their love is deadly, but love, like death, will have its way.
THE BEAR WITH 2 SHAD0WS link
Based on the stories my Lakota mother told me as a child when I was deathly ill in a freezing Detroit basement apartment. Think a Native American LORD OF THE RINGS.
FROM THE GREAT BEYOND HOP!
You dare not miss it!!
ZOMBIE PREPAREDNESS!
LISTEN TO THE CDC
Thanks, Alex!
THE WORLDS OF ROLAND YEOMANS
Donna Hole astonishes with her insights on my linked worlds
FANTASTIC REVIEW OF THE LEGEND OF VICTOR STANDISH
Michael Di Gesu does a masterful review. I am honored by his friendship
LIFE LESSONS taught me by GYPSY
Dedicated to GYPSY
PAPYRUS PRODUCTIONS
Have Wendy make your book into a trailer that wows the reader!
HELP THE HURTING
100% of the profits for ALL my books this FEBRUARY are going to THE SALVATION ARMY. My Valentine's gift to the hurting.
Buy_BLOOD WILL TELL
One lone telepath finds himself a helpless spectator as the race of Man is subjugated into mindless drones by the very blood within their bodies.When the war is over, and he finds himself totally alone ... How can he go on and why?
CALL ME TOMBS
The last Lakota Heyoka faces voodoo and ultimate evil in the Carpathian Mountains of Transylvania with his Hellhound, Puppy
CATCH FIRE!
BLOG TOUR FOR ALEX J, CAVANAUGH'S NEWEST NOVEL
SIV'S BLOGFEST!
The Norse Gods Are Watching You!
NERDY IS THE NEW SEXY!
BECOME A JEDI KNIGHT FOR TEENS
THE SECRET OF SPRUCE KNOLL
Help save the endangered species of Earth by buying THE SECRET OF SPRUCE KNOLL!
AMAZON KEEPS SELLING OUT!
Written by the author who could very well turn out to be the new William Faulkner, Elliot Grace
FABULOSITY GALORE bookstore
Visit an online bookstore and help a blogging friend!!
Very awesome, Roland. The words you were forced to use did not stand out like second cousins twice removed. They fit so perfectly with the writing I fear I my entry paled by comparison.
ReplyDeleteThanks for participating.
---"The blood moon leered down on Alice and me through thick, silent mists snaking above us. The mists were the only things silent across the grassy courtyard." Love the imagery!
ReplyDeleteSmooth, sir, very smooth. I'm taken in.
ReplyDeleteGreat entry.
Thanks for sharing.
love your dialogue in this piece Roland- when the old man was talking I thought of grafiki off of the lion king. :)
ReplyDeleteGreat work and well written. I enjoyed your words and imagery throughout.
ReplyDeleteWow, this is such a great line,"I was so scared it felt like my skin was about to leap off me and do the Mambo with my skeleton."---Such a great teaser, but I must tell you. It is so fun to read this outloud. My daughter just loved it :)
ReplyDeleteWendy :
ReplyDeleteWhat are you talking about? Your passage was great. I wanted to know more about Kayla's dangerous war with the creatures out of myth.
Thanks for the nice words about my entry.
Siv :
I'm glad you liked my imagery. I'm even more delighted you read my excerpt aloud to your daughter and that she loved it. That made my morning. :)
Heather :
That's Victor for you : smooth, very smooth - even in the roughest times! Thanks for enjoying his adventure.
Summer :
Yes, Legba is a rascal. But don't let his appearance fool you : there's more to him than meets mortal eyes. I am so happy my work reminded you of a classic like THE LION KING.
Thanks, Josh :
This was a fun blogfest, wasn't it? Being ill, yet being at work, too, leaves me with so little free time to visit all my friends. Roland
Hi,
ReplyDeleteBrilliant! I so love V & A, and the obligatory words slotted in without notice. ;)
Hee hee, some of the words already existed within my excerpt: only two required as alternatives!
best
F
Thanks, Francine.
ReplyDeleteBeing at work leaves me with little time to visit my friends. Sorry. And I have that convention all this weekend. Whew! Sometimes there are not hours in the day!
It means a lot that you liked my entry. Voice and attitude - that's Victor, all right!
I will get to your entry, promise, Roland
Very nice! I could feel the fear in the old French Quarter streets.
ReplyDeleteNothing to add, just wanted to wish you a great and happy weekend, Roland!
ReplyDeleteWendy and SIv pretty much express my thoughts. Wonderful imagery. Always the perfectionist. Smooth and subtle phrases glided through the scene.
ReplyDeleteNicely written! It's always a joy to read your writing, Roland. :)
ReplyDeleteAmazing job, Roland! Not only did you work in Wendy's 'M' words seamlessly, you managed to write about two of my favorite Loa, Papa Legba and Erzulie. So do you believe Marie L. was one woman, or was it a woman and her daughter in the same role and that's how she managed to go on so long?
ReplyDeleteVR : I personally think the daughter lived the role of her mother, fostering the legend of the long-lived Marie Laveau. In my novel, NEW ORLEANS ARABESQUE, I have the daughter grow old as Marie drains her of her youth. In that novel, Marie is still middle-aged appearing in the year 2005. McCord lets her alone in her life-draining because she preys on criminals.
ReplyDeleteLydia : That's really nice of you to say.
Michael : Your own entry was elegant and evocative. Great bit of prose poetry.
T.D. : That book is headed your way. Gypsy just cost me the price of a used car. I am flying on vapors at the moment. But next paycheck, it is heading your way. Sorry about the delay getting it to you in the Carribbean.
Marsha : your praise means a lot to me. Thanks.
Well done Roland :) I really liked how you used "Myth" as a lisp. I had to smile at that.
ReplyDelete......dhole
...like an oil painting, each stroke applied with masterful precision, I pictured the entire scene with vivid clarity, as always;)
ReplyDeleteWell done, Roland.
EL
Thanks, Donna :
ReplyDeleteI was concerned some might think it a myth-take! LOL.
Elliot :
Your words were a great way to start off the morning, right before I go to speak at that Sci-Fi Convention. Wish me luck, Roland
Nice excerpt, as usual, Roland! Love the moon leering, etc. :) Have a GREAT weekend!
ReplyDeleteCool. (=
ReplyDeleteCompletely brilliant! Of course, now I have to go look up these people. I don't know much of the history of New Orleans. Creepy cool, though.
ReplyDeleteI really hope Victor gets published soon!
Thanks, Carol :
ReplyDeleteI've seen that leering moon while walking the Katrina-devastated streets of New Orleans. Brrr.
Jo :
Thanks. It's hard to be cool writing with presentations to give buzzing in my head. Glad you liked my post.
WordsCrafter :
I really hope Victor gets published soon, too. He was a big hit with my audience at the convention today. They wanted me to bring Alice tomorrow. But I reminded them that when she eats finger sandwiches, it can get messy!
The history of New Orleans is so fascinating, influenced as it was by being governed by the governments of Spain, France, and finally America during the most stunning and evolving time on the world stage. Roland