Samantha Redstreake Geary has this great contest that life had bruised out of my consciousness. There is still time!
http://writerlysam.com/imagine_epic-north-music/
Welcome to THE CONQUERORS, a Steampunk Viking flash fiction challenge for the industry release, ARCADIA (produced & published by Really Slow Motion).
Pulling inspiration from the exclusive industry track, “The Song of the World Tree”, by brilliant composer, Tapsa Kuusniemi,
and the stunning album cover, by gifted graphic designer & composer, Koke Núñez Gómez,
FORGE an epic tale (under 500 words) that conquers the imagination!
Submit your entries in the comments section of her page by August 9th, midnight EST!
Here is my entry {470 words}
THE SONG OF THE WORLD TREE
The bleak pale sun glittered blindingly upon the ice-fields and the
snow-covered plains. Winter’s light
struck sheens of silver from rent chainmail and broken blade, where the dead
lay as they had fallen.
The nerveless hand yet gripped the broken hilt. The helmeted heads were drawn back in
grotesque death-throes, tilted red beards and golden beards bent grimly upward,
as if in last invocation to Wotan and merciless Valkyries who left them as
unworthy of reward in Valhalla.
The smoldering tub to my left bubbled like the blood from the mouth of
the dying Viking by my side. The sword
hilt was slippery in my sweaty right hand.
My left hand clutched the ingredient that countless sailors had dreaded for
centuries.
The Viking died. Only I was
left. My back was to Yggdrasil, the
World Tree. Its gnarled roots drank in
the blood of the Viking. Three
glistening roots writhed under my boots.
I looked down at them.
“No, Tree. You’ll not drink my
blood -- only the blood of those who come against me this day.”
A leprous blue cloud billowed closer and closer to me. I smiled bitterly. The true enemy. It had tired of sending its human pawns to
kill the World Tree only to lose them.
It flowed closer. A voice of
fungus murmured in my mind as it neared.
I felt dirty at its touch.
‘You are no
Norseman. Who are you?’
“I am Lucanus, a physician from Crete.”
‘Physician?’
I gestured with my bloody bronze sword.
“Yes, I have the cure for what ails you.”
‘No weapon forged by
mortal hands can kill me. Yggdrasil
tasks me by its very promise of life. Step aside, and you will live.’
The Spartan helmet on my head was so cold I knew frost lay heavy upon
it. “I did not step aside when I fought
alongside the Three Hundred. I will not
step aside now.”
‘Then, DIE!’
It swept down upon me. I did not
slash as it expected. You do not destroy
fog by sword. I dipped my blade into the
smoldering tub by my side. I flung the
last ingredients to Greek Fire into it as my world became leprous blue mists.
The fire flared into fierce life.
I smeared my sword in it. Then, I
slashed through the billowing Anti-Life that sought to swallow the Tree of
Life.
No, you don’t stab fog. You burn
it. And this clot of Anti-Life burned
and burned and burned.
‘No mortal may kill
me!’ it wailed in my mind.
I watched it burn into crispy wisps and said, “I haven’t been mortal
since I delivered that baby in the stable.”
Behind me, Yggdrasil began to sing, and I shivered. Its voice was like the music heard faintly at
the edge of dream … or death.
{FINI}
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Nice one. I am convinced that Yggdrasil's voice is heard both in dreams AND at death. Which is as it should be.
ReplyDeleteThe timing and placement of ‘Then, DIE!’ makes for an extremely dramatic climax in this story.
ReplyDeleteI always re-read your words, hoping some of your eloquence will influence my writing. I don't know how you do it. You're brilliant.
I hope you're in good spirits and health.
That was epic! And burning instead of slashing. Smart move. Excellent entry, Roland.
ReplyDeleteElephant's Child:
ReplyDeleteYggdrasil thinks so! :-)
Robyn:
You made my weary evening so much better for staying such nice things about my writing. :-)
I am still int the game, though a bit bruised! Thank you for asking.
Alex:
Thanks for saying so. I hope my entry gets a nod, but I do not have much luck with such things.
Thank you for always being my friend. :-)