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Speaking of ensembles:
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Take Ken Folett's Century Trilogy.
It begins with Fall of Giants.
The first 7 pages of that novel consists of the list of characters. Wow.
How many people put the book down after seeing that?
J K Rowling knew how to handle an ensemble novel.
Despite one school of thought that urges
an ensemble novel not to be just of two major characters with a supporting cast,
JK had a triad of heroes. And her novels did just fine.
So what are some good guidelines
for an ensemble novel?
1.) YOU know your characters.
Your novel's characters must stand out one from the other if they are to stick in the minds of your readers.
Readers will not have the advantage of being able to remember their faces as they would do in a large party.
If you know your characters inside and out, then you will make them distinctive.
2.) INTRODUCE YOUR CHARACTERS SLOWLY
Remember that large party I was talking about up above?
Imagine if host of said party introduced you to a dozen people within minutes?
How many of them would you remember ... even with aid of seeing their faces?
Give each character AN IMPORTANT FUNCTION THAT PROPELS your novel along and an arc that is meaningful.
3.) NO MINI-ME's ALLOWED
No subservient character that is not part of the group, but just follows along to serve as comic relief or sounding board for needful exposition.
In my The Not-So-Innocents Abroad,
I took pains to not let 11 year old Nikola Tesla become that to my story-line.
Even his black cat, Macak, served an important function.
How can you tell if a character is not a Mini-Me but a supporting character
(which is entirely all right, and is, in fact, necessary for ensemble novels)?
A supporting character has an actual life when not with the rest of the group ...
and that is mentioned in the novel.
4.) NO TRAITS WITH LEGS PLEASE
Your novel is not SNOW WHITE so please no walking traits that masquerade as living, breathing characters!
People are mosaics of many traits, many interests, many flaws, and hopefully many virtues!
5.) NO "ONE OF THESE IS NOT THE SAME"
Avoid homogeny.
Most groups have diversity in their ranks, even if they are performing the same task: Policeman, Fireman, Doctors.
BUT AVOID "THE ONE OF EACH" CURSE --
Star Trek: Voyager seemed guilty of that to me.
It smacked to me of tokenism, checking off boxes when writing the character into being,
6.) REMEMBER THE BREAKFAST CLUB --
GIVE YOUR CHARACTERS PASSIONS
If you give your characters passions
—poetry, football, astrology—
those interests will influence their reactions and distinguish them from each other.
PAY ATTENTION TO YOUR CHARACTERS' SPEECH PATTERNS
Not everyone speaks the same: their education, their social background, their interests will all shape how they speak.
After a few chapters, if you have done your job right, readers will be able to tell one character from another just by the way in which they speak.
LET CHOICE OF CLOTHING REVEAL CHARACTER
The prim and proper girl versus the cheerleader. The poor student versus the wealthy socialite.
The jock versus the scholar. The shy student versus the extrovert.
I did not mention one article of clothing but you saw the clothing difference in each set of individuals I mentioned, didn't you?
7.) DON'T BE KANYE WEST
Name your characters with care.
No Josh and Joe; no Kira and Kelly.
Names that blur together in your readers' minds are the kiss of death.
Give your characters distinctive names that stand apart from every other character.
HERO LOST ANTHOLOGY
BLOG TOUR
I haven't done a book tour since my DON'T BUY MY BOOK BLOG TOUR!
I was wondering when the HERO LOST ANTHOLOGY comes out in paperback
if any of you would like to have me pay a visit to your blog.
I would do the heavy lifting and write the copy for you.
Or you could ask me questions. Your choice.
Let me know if you would be interested.
Roland (Stetson in Hand)
Well, I screwed up when it came to similar names with my first book, but it turned out all right anyway.
ReplyDeleteEnsemble casts are challenging. Everyone has to be their own person.
I have an idea for a tour stop that involves several of you. Will email.
And I've since watched Voyager on NetFlix and it was much better than I'd remembered.
The 1st Season of Voyager was too tokenish, but it got slowly better. :-)
DeleteI will happily join whatever idea you come up with.
Great tips Roland and thanks for putting the call out for folks to help out with the book tour.
ReplyDeleteIt is the old shotgun approach: reach out to as many people as you can!! :-)
DeleteExcellent post Roland. I love all the tips on character. Especially the unique aspects of diving into their psychology. :)
ReplyDeleteImagine what your characters do in their downtime is always a good way to better grasp what makes them tick. I'm glad you liked my post.
DeleteGreat post. Come to think of it, Monsters in Our Wake has a bit of an ensemble cast, but I hadn't even realized that until now.
ReplyDeleteYou definitely have a lot of experience when it comes to huge casts of characters. If you can do another spooky post for my blog, I'm game. Always happy to host you.
I'll have to put my Thinking Cap on to come up with a spooky post worthy of your excellent blog! :-)
DeleteSorry for the delay to my reply but I have worked one and a half shifts today and tonight! WHEW!!!
Such insightful lists, loved all the tips that should be made laws.
ReplyDelete:-) Thanks, Susan! You're kind to say that!
DeleteLove The Breakfast Club reference. :)
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