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Tuesday, June 21, 2016

CAN'T SEEM TO GET THERE FROM HERE

Vesper
http://chickwithaquill.blogspot.com/2016/06/a-map-of-way-forward.html
has written a timely and important post on her blog.

Sometimes we get lost in the meandering paragraphs of our novels.

Which way to go?

Vesper has struggled with how to find her way through the fog of the wisps of plot in her head she sees for her story.

Multiple POV's seem called for, 

but they almost always confuse or throw off the identification the reader has with one character.

She felt she needed a firm outline , but how to go about writing a good one?

Vesper happily stumbled upon Larry Brooks’s Story Fix.

Blake Synder's SAVE THE CAT, though talking about movie scripts, is another great aid.

 https://www.amazon.com/Save-Cat-Blake-Snyder-ebook/dp/B00340ESIS/




I wrote a post on a Three Stage Blueprint for a good story outline:
http://rolandyeomans.blogspot.com/2014/03/your-car-whats-under-hood.html

 {Image of the werewolf, Higgins, courtesy of the genius of Leonora Roy}

If you are of a mind, take a peek at it.  It might help a bit.

Of course, that doesn't mean that I am not having to swim against the currents with my latest Steampunk, 
THE NOT-SO-INNOCENTS AT LARGE.

How to make a Texas Ranger taking on the Sidhe in 1836 Avalon 

and fighting dragons atop the flying Xanadu seem riveting and real has proven to be a real challenge.

I hope your Strawberry Moon went well and your WIP progresses smoothly.

8 comments:

  1. I'm not much of an outliner, I confess. Pantsers for the win! :)

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    1. Yes, by not plotting too detailed, I have stumbled upon some great story twists!

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  2. I had far too many POVs weaving through my novel but as I got to know my characters, I was able to solve that problem. I did tear my hair out and can fully understand the frustration. Thanks for the 'go to' tips. Will check those out :)

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    1. Nicola, You're right: the better we get to know our characters, the easier it becomes to tell their stories.

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  3. Big believer in Save the Cat.
    Too many points of view has never been my problem. I've always limited it. I'd confuse myself otherwise.

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    1. And if the writer gets confused, then you know the reader certainly be!

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  4. Well, I differ from the general consensus on multiple POVs. I like them and use them in my scifi. They can be handled but one must avoid 'head-hopping' and not change the POV too often within one chapter. D. Gabaldon does this very well and inspires me.

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  5. I've not read Story Fix. Unique POV voices is something I struggled with in the beginning.

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