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Tuesday, January 17, 2012


Robert E. Howard, ghost writing ...

Yes, though I am a ghost I keep up with the evolution of words and phrases.

After all, during the Great Depression

my stories earned me an income that surpassed the local banker's in my small Texas town of Cross Plains.

So again I ask you ... is your novel sexually active?

Or does it just lay there on the page?

Homer, Shakespeare, Poe, Twain -- the immortals of fiction knew it was the key to fiction :

The heart draws the eyes --

if you want your novel read, it must have love and action.

Characterization is great,

but Edgar Rice Burroughs (the father of all cardboard heroes) was the most translated author of the 1900's. He took exotic locales, a man of action, and love in jeopardy, mixing them in a stew millions and millions bought.

Those of you who know only my characters but have never read my stories, you may think of cold steel, hot blood, and sensual women. Yes, they were in my stories. And no, they weren't. The heart was there and mystery.

J K Rowling? Where's the love there? What heart doesn't go out to a mistreated boy? Oliver Twist. Wart, young Arthur. Harry Potter is a meld of those two icons.

The heart draws the eyes. The action, tension, and danger keeps the pages turning.

Your dream is to be a professional.

Yet, only the big name authors can keep to their genre of choice.

The rest of us must be adaptable enough to go from genre to genre, depending upon the demands of the market.

To sell as many stories as I did, I had to go from one genre to another : Westerns, Sea Stories, science fiction, horror, fantasy, even war stories.

If we are professionals, we can cross genres because we know the core skeleton of a good story :

The heart draws the eyes. Action and dread turns the pages.

We all know the core plot :

The underdog hero/heroine is pulled into a problem beyond his/her capacity to handle.

He attempts to solve it to only to find himself plunged into deeper dangers that grow logically out of his actions and the actions of his adversaries.

All appears lost : the dream is crushed, his friends are gone, and hope has died.

In this midnight of the soul, he learns a Truth about himself, about Life that re-shapes his thinking. He struggles, renewed and reborn.

He triumphs or loses magnificently ... or a little bit of both.

Some turn up their lips at the thought of formula --

but from HAMLET to THE OLD MAN AND THE SEA if you look closely enough, you will see the core skeleton of every good story.

Love in jeopardy draws the reader in. The tension of what waits around the corner keeps the reader turning the pages. And flashes of action, like lightning bolts, spur the reader on.

Like cooking a stew, you must sift the proper balance of ingredients. A likeable hero. A dream/love just out of reach. Danger. Tension. A hope of success. Series of cruel failures. And the last triumphant struggle.

Remember :

The reader wants to be kept in perpetual anticipation,

to not be able to put the book down,

to laugh, to cringe with sympathy at cruel blows, and to cheer at the end.

Last thought : sizzle sells the steak.

Suspense is better than action. (And you can stretch it over more pages.)

The fear of the unknown is always stronger than the grabbling with the monster unmasked. Action taken against a barely seen adversary is always to be preferred.

Happy NEW Year writing.


  1. Ahhhh yes. This was wonderfully put. Nothing keeps a readers attention like love in jeopardy!

  2. Yep that's right. Love, thwarted love, and death of love. All grabbers and page turners.

    Thanks for stopping in and saying hi at the Write Game.

  3. Bottom line, the characters must still be the heart of the story.
    Frazetta was amazing.

  4. Enjoyed this post, Roland, and it's a good reminder since I'm in the planning stages of a new suspense/crime novel.

    "Like cooking a stew, you must sift the proper balance of ingredients." (and don't forget the seasoning - that's the individual flavour the author brings to the mix)

    Best wishes for 2012!

  5. You said it, man. If I don't care about the characters, I don't read on, simple as that.

    Nice post.

  6. Sorry, everyone, but I have spent the day putting the finishing touches to GHOST WRITERS IN THE SKY -- this being my first and only day off after working 8 days straight.

    Colene :
    Love in jeopardy gets me every time, too.

    cleemckenzie :
    Your blog was great to visit. Thanks for visiting mine. BOND is now playing TIME on, a fitting tune to my day today -- not enough time!

    Alex :
    That very reason is why I could never get caught up in Isaac Asimov's tales, even though the premises were fabulous -- his characters seemed cardboard.

    D.G. :
    I wish you luck in mapping out your new crime/suspense novel. You're at the fun stage! Thanks for dropping by, Roland

    Michael :
    I've not gone to certain movies, that were very popular, because the lead character was not someone who interested me. Thank you so much for visiting again and staying to chat, Roland

  7. Sexually active characters? That depends on how you define sex. Does sex with aliens count?

    "I did not have sex with that alien."

  8. Walter :
    LOL. If an alien looked like Cate Blanchett or Olivia Wilde, I would be sorely tempted! Thanks for dropping in and staying to talk awhile, Roland

  9. Sizzle sells the steak. I love that. And to your question...yes.

    Good luck with everything you have going on!

  10. Thanks, Yvonne :
    That was quite an evocative poem on your blog today. It reminded me of Thea Gilmore's WATER TO SKY :

    Thanks for the well wishes. I sometimes feel like theDon Quixote of authors! :-) Roland

  11. LOL! Too awesome. Robert E. Howard is one of my favorite authors of all time. And I love that, perpetual anticipation. That's what it's all about!

  12. I write romance, so I can honestly say yes to that. I really like how you summed up the formula though. You took it from dry to exciting. :D

  13. Heather :
    Robert E. Howard is also one of my favorite authors as well. His Lovecraftian tales outdid the master in my mind. And Perpetual Anticipation is what we authors live in with regards to being published and bought, right?

    Jasmine :
    The credit all goes to Robert E. Howard's ghost! I wish you luck in submitting your novel to that evaluation, Roland

  14. Hi Roland .. must get across and find out more about these authors - I guess I'm very uneducated about American writers ..

    It must have love of story craft and character if appropriate and then add the sizzle and the wait for the outcome - so true ...

    I see you're over 1,000 fantastic news .. and remind me when one of your books is out in print please!

    Cheers Hilary